Dear Jameela , you did a really good job at just talking about one thing out of a whole topic witch made the reader stay on task . What you need to work at is that when you are talking about one thing , talk about it more . You gave a lot of information. Good job . Your friend Nadia
Dear Jameela, What I liked about your audio is that you gave allot of detail and said allot in one audio. What you can work on is to find a better spot because it was hard to hear you cause of the back round noise.
Dear Jameela , you did a really good job at just talking about one thing out of a whole topic witch made the reader stay on task . What you need to work at is that when you are talking about one thing , talk about it more . You gave a lot of information. Good job . Your friend Nadia
ReplyDeleteDear Jameela,
ReplyDeleteWhat I liked about your audio is that you gave allot of detail and said allot in one audio. What you can work on is to find a better spot because it was hard to hear you cause of the back round noise.